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| Topic Started: Dec 21 2007, 06:00 PM (353 Views) | |
| Ben Zwycky | Nov 15 2008, 10:27 PM Post #16 |
Fearsome Fleet Leader :D
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Chapter 28 is up, the next one takes us up to the day of the military exercises and there'll be a lot of action in chapters 30 and 31, once I get them written   
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| Ben Zwycky | Apr 23 2009, 07:37 PM Post #17 |
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Fearsome Fleet Leader :D
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I've actually got a lot done on this, am near the end of the first draft of the final chapter (I'm not telling you what number that is, but it's more than 31), but nobody's reading it, so I'm not going to post another chapter until somebody actually responds and gives me some feedback on what I've done so far (it's kinda the point of sharing it here, you know...  ). Each piece of useful feedback will be rewarded with another chapter.For those of you who haven't even joined my group to see my private stuff, please do so, it'll be worth reading, promise  Joinable groups can be found here: http://s15.zetaboards.com/writersdream/home/?c=22 |
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| Ben Zwycky | May 2 2009, 08:34 PM Post #18 |
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Fearsome Fleet Leader :D
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All finished now, I've put up chapter 29, if that doesn't get you wanting more chapters, then there's no hope for you  Get  ing and give me feedback, each piece of useful feedback will be rewarded with another chapter (and the ones to come are action-packed ) Join my group (link is in the above post) to get access to it, if you haven't already.
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| Ben Zwycky | Jun 17 2009, 10:52 AM Post #19 |
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Fearsome Fleet Leader :D
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All chapters currently up have been updated to my latest revision. Still looking for feedback on everything there (i'm sure there are still remaining shortcomings, but specifics would be very helpful). If there's some new helpful feedback by the time I get back then I'll post the rest of it all at once (it gets very 'interesting' (in Lionheart-speak ) from here on in). Respond here or send me a PM to request access, my access group is no longer 'joinable', I just grant you access directly.
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| Ben Zwycky | Sep 19 2009, 01:20 PM Post #20 |
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Fearsome Fleet Leader :D
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All story chapter posts (and the setting description) have been updated to the latest revision (I've been constantly doing that, my strongbox is always an active area) and added a little bonus for those who have read up to chapter 29 |
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| Ben Zwycky | Oct 22 2009, 09:39 AM Post #21 |
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Fearsome Fleet Leader :D
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All remaining chapters have now been posted, so go take a look at how the story ends! |
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| Ben Zwycky | Feb 17 2010, 08:56 PM Post #22 |
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Right, MAJOR update/rewrite, have updated 30 chapters (some were just renumbered, because 2 extra chapters were added in the middle) opinions, please, there'll probably be some polishing needed, so let me know if you notice anything out of place
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| la-vida-loca | Feb 19 2010, 10:33 PM Post #23 |
Låt den rätte komma in
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i shall get on it immediately!!! you picked a good time to update, i have February Vacation all next week. ^_^ haha so i know where i'll be! *goes to check out update/rewrite* |
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