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Riley's Awesome Blog; National Treasure Fan Fic
Topic Started: Apr 29 2008, 05:45 AM (112 Views)
Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Apr 29 2008, 05:45 AM Post #1
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	A series of one shots, insight into Riley's everyday-isms. Enjoy! Same fic is also posted on ff.net and livejournal! ------------------------------------------ This would be a series of drabbles, one-shots and what else. All starring Riley Poole, Ben Gates, and Abigail Chase. But mostly Riley. R&R please! Disclaimer: I do not own Riley. Or Ben, or Abby. Or National Treasure. sigh too bad. 1: THE INTRO NTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNT Ben passed by as Riley typed furiously on his laptop. He doubled back, and watched Riley with interest as he tapped away on the keyboard. “What’re you doing?” Ben asked, eyebrow raised. He drank from his mug of coffee. “Blog.” Riley looked at Ben. “I assume you do know what a blog is, right Ben?” Ben glared at Riley. “Alright, so you do know.” Riley went back to typing. “I'll call it..."Riley's Awesome Blog". Who wouldn't want to read that?” “Riley, just because you say it’s awesome doesn't mean people will want to read it...” Ben pointed out. Riley looked at him with innocent-looking eyes. “But... it’s my blog... who wouldn't want to read that?” Abby called out. “We didn't even read your book Riley...” She swung an arm up to Ben’s shoulder. “You still didn’t read my book!” “We did.” Ben admitted. Abby glared at Ben angrily, as if he just gave a big secret away. “Should be called “Blogging Blunders”…” She smirked, satisfied with her words. Riley gave her the famous ‘kicked puppy’ look he was trying to perfect. This time, it worked. But on a different person. “Aw, Abby you hurt his feelings. He's giving you the puppy eyes…" Ben laughed. Abby glared at Ben again, eyes angrier this time, and stormed away. "Uh-oh, look what you did Ben." Riley said, smirking. He followed Abby with his eyes as she stormed to the kitchen. Tell-tale signs of the fridge being opened and a glass of water being filled could be heard. Ben rolled his eyes, and followed Abby, leaving Riley again in his delusions of grandeur. “Riley’s Awesome Blog… Yeah… Just about right.” He tucked his arms behind his head, stretched out his legs and yawned like a lion. He had this satisfied smirk on his face. This is going to be interesting. NTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNT R&R please! -Jaeh xD



Ben Zwycky	Apr 29 2008, 05:47 PM Post #2
Fearsome Fleet Leader :D Posts: 541 Group: Admin Member #4 Joined: November 29, 2007	Interesting character dynamics, I haven't seen either of the films, so I don't know how much you've borrowed from those. Not too much else to comment on, no obvious grammatical or spelling mistakes that I could see, but I'm kinda sleepy right now. Carry on!



la-vida-loca	Apr 30 2008, 12:24 AM Post #3
Låt den rätte komma in Posts: 2,017 Group: Elite Members Member #13 Joined: December 3, 2007	mm, indeed! i couldn't see too many grammar mistakes either...but then again i kinda suck at grammar. nice beginning Jaeh!



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	May 1 2008, 01:18 AM Post #4
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	thanks guys.. LH! you should watch it! It's AWESOME!!! have you watched it lvl? well, carrying on to the next chapter: Disclaimer: I don’t own Riley. cries Italics in Riley’s POV. 2: BUS RIDES RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY It doesn’t happen to me often. It was just one of those days when you are so tired, that you fall asleep on the bus. -- Riley looked out the window. Other cars sped by, making him wish his baby(my baby- my Ferrari) was here with him. But she was currently in the shop, being fixed for that awful dent(dent is a giant understatement) that the mailbox had caused(so it was really my fault-I forgot that it was in reverse. But someone placed the mailbox in the wrong place!). But, it was better that he wasn’t around his baby during that particular moment, for he fell asleep. After a few minutes, he woke up, drooling on his hoodie. He quickly wiped it off(embarrassing- although nothing really embarrasses me anymore after that scene in high school…), and yawned. Riley faced his seatmate groggily. “Dokko? (Where, in Japanese)” He asked his seatmate, trying to form a Where are we in English, but instead, stuttering a ‘where’ in Japanese. He rubbed his eyes, trying to wake himself up. “Asan na tayo(Where are we?)?” He repeated, in Filipino this time. His seatmate scratched his head. “Wo sind wir?” He asked for the third time, now in German. Then something hit him. “Oh my g- Sorry!” Riley quickly apologized to his seatmate, who was looking befuddled. “I was asking Where or where are we in German… Filipino… Japanese…”He trailed off, and coughed to hide his embarrassment. “Where are we, anyway?” “Corner of 5th street.” The guy said, and jumped a seat away from him. Riley sighed, and scratched his head. He quickly got off the next bus stop. -- Awkward. RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY RILEY R&R please, no matter how suck-ish it is! Based on a true experience. Although, Where are we was only spoken in one language, but couldn’t be understood just the same. -Jaeh xD



la-vida-loca	May 3 2008, 11:30 AM Post #5
Låt den rätte komma in Posts: 2,017 Group: Elite Members Member #13 Joined: December 3, 2007	Quote: have you watched it lvl? yea, i watched the first one but i haven't seen the second one, though i heard it was good.



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	May 4 2008, 04:05 AM Post #6
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	it was :p you have to watch it, lol! :p



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:24 AM Post #7
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	I guess, since I'm back, I ought to post some new stuff... ARGH! I wanted to post an original one but I'm not home and the file is in that computer! Anyway.... Disclaimer: I don’t own Riley. grumbles There is more than one way to a point, right? Well, this is one of the… more unconventional ways… to get to a point- to get a girl. RileyOC.. well, a bit. BENBENBENBENBENBENBENBENBENBEN Unconventional “So, let me get this straight… He hacked into your computer, got where you lived, dropped by your doorstep and asked you out?” Ben asked, bewildered. The girl smiled shyly. Riley gave the girl his best smile. “Look, Ben, you always told me that there is more than one way to a point, and well, I found one way.” “Riley. You hacked into a girl’s computer to ask her out.” “Look, the ‘girl’ has a name.” The girl held out a hand. “I’m Aly, by the way.” Ben took her hand and shook it. “Look,” Ben coughed to hide his embarrassment. “I’m so sorry for what Riley did.” “I’m right here, guys.” Riley protested. “Besides, I am NOT sorry.” “It’s no big deal, really.” The girl replied, still smiling. She coughed. Riley stood up. “Lemme get you a glass of water…” He looked partly annoyed. He glared at Ben. “Thanks.” “I’m coming with you.” Ben said, following after Riley. “Riley!” Ben called after Riley, once they stepped in the kitchen. “What were you thinking? When I said that there is more than one way to a point, I didn’t mean it like this…” Riley filled the glass with water. “Look, Ben, it doesn’t matter.” Riley faced Ben. “I asked her out. What’s the big deal?” “You hacked into her system to get her address.” “And you dragged the woman you’re with now into a treasure hunt then, Ben.” Riley retorted. Riley got him good, and he knew it. Riley smirked at him. “Aren’t you gonna ask me how I did it? How I came up with it? It surpassed your preservation room plan, Ben.” Ben rolled his eyes. “So how did you do it?” Riley stopped in his tracks. His mouth was stuffed with a bite off a cheese sandwich. He mumbled something incoherent. Ben repeated. “How did you do it? How did you hack into her computer?” “Easy.” “Well? Let’s hear it.” “I was at an internet shop, saw her, saw her e-mail. And that summarizes my story.” Riley finished off his sandwich, and looked especially pleased. He left the kitchen, and joined Aly on the couch. “That’s it. I’m not getting my kid a computer.” And that, kids, is the proper way on how to get a girl. Try it sometime, it really works. Don’t let your overprotective best friend know, though, his big-brother instincts pops out and you’ll never hear the end of it. If there be a huge chance that he would find out about it, make sure you have a good retort. And make sure your best friend’s girlfriend wouldn’t hear anything about any of this. Gotta run; Abby’s calling me. She sounds angry. I am toast. RILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEY A review would make Riley happy… Make me happy too. Even if it’s just to say it’s not that funny. -Jaeh xD



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:25 AM Post #8
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	FRIENDSHIP fluff, Riley and Abby, for a change. It’s in Abby’s POV too. again, I repeat, only friends… friendship fluff. A bit of Riley angsty-ish moments too. No Riley POV this time. Just.. Abby’s. A different perspective on our Riley…  Disclaimer- I unfortunately don’t own anyone. NTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNT Drenched Abby’s POV “Riley!” I looked out from the house, and found Riley sitting in the middle of the sprinklers. What is he doing? “Yeah?” “What are you doing?” “Getting myself soaked.” “Well come on in! you’ll get yourself a cold!” Sometimes, admittedly, I feel more like his mother than his friend. The things I do for Riley… “I’ll be right there. Just leave the towel somewhere.” I hung the towel on a chair outside. “Well, here.” I closed the door, and sat near the window. I watched Riley do nothing but sit there in the middle of the sprinklers. He then lied down on the grass, and watched the sky. I decided that the lawn is soaked enough, so I turned off the sprinklers. I returned to the window to watch Riley. He did not move from his spot. After a few seconds, rain fell from the sky. Riley didn’t even flinch. I decided I’ve had enough. What is he doing anyway? With an umbrella in my hand, I walked outside to where Riley is. “What are you doing?” I asked softly. “Getting myself soaked.” “You’re not… yourself.” I told him. I closed the umbrella, and lied down beside him on the grass. “What’s wrong?” “Have I ever told you about water, Abs?” Riley started. He waved a hand in the air. “Water cleanses everything. The blades of grass, the leaves on the trees, even the sidewalks and the streets.” I faced him. This, is not the normal Riley. I’ve never heard him speak like this since something wrong happen. Wait, did something wrong happen? “That’s… really deep, Ri.” I smiled. “What happened? You never talk like this unless there’s something wrong.” Riley didn’t answer. “Someone once told me that when you let yourself get drenched by the water, as it flows away, dripping from your skin, you would feel cleansed. As if nothing in this world will ever go wrong, or as if nothing ever went wrong.” For a few minutes, we just lied there, feeling the rain on our skin. The quiet was calming, and yet the nagging feeling that there was something wrong just wouldn’t go away. “Riley, what’s wrong?” I prodded again. “I don’t want to talk about it right now. Maybe later.” Riley said, and continued staring at the sky. I patted him on the shoulder. “I’ll be inside, Ri.” I knew he needed to be alone for a few minutes, to cool off. I went inside, and dried myself off. I resumed my position by the window near the door, waiting for Riley. ABBYABBYABBYABBYABBYABBYABBYABBY R&R pleaaaaase! Please! Please! Please! Pwetty please! with the cherry on top? xD -Jaeh



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:25 AM Post #9
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	What’s wrong with Riley? Ben’s POV this time. More Riley sadness... BenAbbyRiley Friendship Fluff, too! Disclaimer: Don’t own it. -sigh- NTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNT Listen Ben’s POV I had just woke up when I saw Abby staring out the window, frowning. I kissed her, and looked out to see what she was watching. It was Riley, lying on the grass, letting himself get soaked by the rain. I grabbed an umbrella, when Abby shook her head at me. She knew what I was going to do, persuade him to go inside. “It won’t work.” She stood up and placed a hand on my shoulder. “I already tried. But, you’re his best friend, Ben.” Right now, those two words carried more weight than I have ever imagined. “Maybe… Maybe he would tell you something.” Abby smiled at me, and sat back down on her chair, and resumed watching Riley. I opened the door, and stood there, staring out at Riley in my pajama-clad glory. The last time I saw Riley like this was when... when his brother died. He was, in a way, a wreck. He wouldn’t stop working, even if there was nothing left to do. He would sit outside every night, just staring at the stars. He ate nothing but pizza and Doritos, which, we found out, were his brother’s favorites. For weeks, Riley wouldn’t say a word. We tried asking him what was wrong, but he wouldn’t tell a thing. He told us everything the day before the funeral. It was a really hard time for him. Hard for us too, seeing him like that. It devastated him. It turned out that he was close to his brother. We heard a lot about him, even though he never got around to actually introducing him personally to us, or us to him. “Hey.” “Hey.” He didn’t even look at me. “Are you okay?” “That’s a stupid question Ben. How well do you know me?” Well, that’s… good, I guess, he’s willing to talk. “Better than you probably think.” I sat down beside him. “What is it, Riley?” “It’s the rain Ben. It’s not helping. It… it won’t go away.” “What won’t go away?” “The pain, Ben.” With that, Riley stood up, and got the towel from the chair on the porch. I followed him in. Abby handed me a towel from the door, and I watched Riley march into the kitchen as I dried myself. I followed him, rubbing my hair with the towel. “What is it, Riley?” I repeated. “Ben. Look at the calendar.” I turned to look at the date. It was the 5th of November. I thought for a moment, baffled. What’s with November 5? Oh. I remember. Riley got some Doritos and silently munched on them. “They tasted better then.” He commented suddenly. I looked at him, and pulled him into a hug. “Riley. I am so sorry.” “Not your fault Ben.” Riley said quietly. He shook me off gently. “Every time I see a white SUV, though…” He tried to smile, but he failed. He sat on the counter. It was all over the news, when his brother died. There was a huge accident, and a pedestrian was killed when a white SUV crashed into the sidewalk. Then Riley received a call on his cell phone. Color drained from his face as he listened. Without a word, he ran out to his car and drove away. Abby looked at me worriedly, and I shrugged and frowned. When he got back a day later, he looked wasted, like he didn’t sleep. He smiled at me and Abby (although it was clearly faked), ran up to his room and locked it. He didn’t come out for hours, except when his pizza arrived. For days, I and Abby tried talking to him. We didn’t get a peep out of him until the day after the funeral. “Ben.. it’s.. my brother. The guy on the news? Hit by the white SUV? He was my brother.” Abby quickly gave him a hug. She was sobbing. Riley looked at me pitifully, like he was looking up to me to make things all better. Like I was his only brother left. A tear fell from his eyes. “Ben. Ben, my brother.. he’s… he’s…” I didn’t even let him speak. I just hugged him fiercely and gave him (and Abby) a glass of water. And we sat at the dining room and started to talk. “I miss him, Ben. I really do.” Riley wiped a tear with his sleeve. “I know.” “He’s the one who told me the wonders water does, Ben. He said, that... water cleanses everything, and washes every bad thing there is. He said that water makes everything all better.” Riley drank from a glass of water. “When we were kids, every time it rained, he would take out our bikes. And we would ride and laugh in the rain, running around until our parents call us in.” The rain. I remembered this one time when it rained a few weeks after the funeral. Riley looked out a window, smiled sadly, then frowned. Then he saw me, and he smiled again, more cheerful this time. Then he was himself again. I didn’t ask him about it, thinking that it was probably just my imagination. “Don’t forget we’re always here for you Riley.” Abby suddenly walked in the kitchen, and put an arm around Riley. I pulled a chair over and sat on it. “We are.” “Thanks guys.” Riley said, smiling sadly. “You guys are the only family I have left.” I ruffled his hair up. “Well, kiddo, it would seem that we have no choice but to keep you here, huh?” “I guess.” He grinned for the first time in the day. “Thanks again.” “We’re your friends Ri. And this is what friends do.” Abby stated. “Best friends.” Riley corrected. I smiled. “And we’re also your family. Which means, you’re stuck with us, and we’re stuck with you. We know it when something’s wrong with you. Even if you’re not telling us.” “So don’t bother trying to hide anything.” Abby put in. “I know.” Riley smiled, and put his Doritos down. “Again, guys, thanks.” BENABBYRILEYBENABBYRILEYBENABBYRILEY R&R please! Next entries would be more… cheerful. xD -Jaeh



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:26 AM Post #10
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	This chapter is dedicated to savvysparrowluv, who helped with this one-shot series’ title and the intro, and to everyone who reviewed! Disclaimer: I own Riley! Really! Well, only in my dreams, anyway… Riley’s POV are in italics again! RILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEY Comments Riley concentrated quietly (which is a huge achievement in my behalf) on the computer screen. Abby had just passed by when Riley suddenly yelped. She almost dropped the glass of water she had and ran quickly beside Riley. “Are you alright Ri?!” “YES! I knew it!” “Knew what?” Abby looked over Riley’s shoulder. “And you said that this wouldn’t work out.” “What is it?” Ben ran beside them, and looked worriedly at Riley. Riley grinned. “I knew people would read my blog Ben! I told you so!” He shook Ben by the shoulders. “HAH! In your face Ben!” He was grinning madly, and proudly showed Ben the counter of his blog. Ben sat on the chair Riley left. He navigated around the page, and found the section he was looking for. “Comments.” “What?” Riley squatted beside Ben, and read one. “Riley: You know Ben Gates?! You live with him?! He’s YOUR BEST FRIEND! GAH! I sooooooooo love him! –Hannah.” Riley read aloud. Ben looked at him with teasing eyes. Riley shrugged. “So what? Still a comment Ben. And still a proof that someone read my blog! Immediately! Unlike some people I know, who wouldn’t even bother reading a certain best friend’s book…” Ben rolled his eyes. Leave it to Riley not to let that one go. “Well, here’s another: BEN! MARRY ME! – Stacy.” “What in the-“ Abby leaned over and read another comment. “Ben. When are you ditching that wife of yours? Come home to me baby! Love, Jenny.” Abby scowled. “Riley, when are you gonna put this down?” Riley frowned. “Ben! I love you! e-mail me! –Nancy.” He pulled the mouse from Ben, who was quickly losing his amused expression. He scrolled down, revealing hundreds of more Ben-related messages. “Ben, you swamped my blog.” “What? I didn’t do anything!” Riley scowled at all the comments. “At least there’s this one… Riley, you rock! (PS: Can you introduce me to Ben? Please?) –Kathy… It’s still all about you.” He sighed audibly. “Here’s… Riley, this blog’s awesome! –Aly…” “At least you got even one good review, Ri.” Ben commented, still frowning. “It’s from my date, Ben. She doesn’t count.” Abby sighed audibly. “Riley, when are you going to put that down?” “I might disable the comment section soon Abs.” Riley drove Ben off the chair. He clicked a few things. “There. But, still, Ben, that leaves proof that some people actually read my blog.” Ben shrugged. Abby wrapped an arm around him. “Ben, never put up a blog of your own.” “I’d never, Abby.” Ben replied, still dazed by all those comments. The two left Riley alone again. Riley leaned back, and sighed. “Still, they read my blog… I’m going to have to disable all comments with the word “Ben” in it.” This is what happens when you happen to have a best friend who discovered a stupidly huge treasure… twice. I’m not going to stop putting up blog entries, though. But please, I’m Riley, he’s Ben. STOP PUTTING UP BEN COMMENTS ON MY BLOG! RILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEY Tell me you saw that coming. :p Riley: I want the spotlight just for once. You! Author! Give me a good one! I would, Riley, in due time. This IS your blog after all. I still say you took that rather well. Well, R&R please! -Jaeh xD



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:28 AM Post #11
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	Some questions are just too weird to be answered. Italics –Riley’s POV Disclaimer: Can I have Riley now? I’m asking nicely because I, unfortunately, don’t own him. Even the other NT chars., I don’t own them. That’s just too bad. PLUTOPLUTOPLUTOPLUTOPLUTO Profound “I wonder how Pluto feels.” Ben looked up from his book. “Huh?” “I wonder how Pluto feels, Ben.” Riley repeated. He turned off the tv (well, Batman was finished) and waved the remote in the air. “What do you mean?” “I mean, Pluto got demoted and all that… Let me rephrase that, I wonder how the Pluto aliens feel… Their planet got demoted on Earth to the status of a dwarf planet. Not much fun in that…” Riley turned to look at Ben, who was sitting behind him. Ben blinked his eyes, unsure of what to answer. “Ah… Riley…” “It doesn’t seem fair at all. Plutonians- or whatever they’re called- have feelings too!” Riley frowned, looking genuinely sorry for the people-beings- who live in Pluto. Ben scratched his head, and went back to the book he was reading, still unsure of what to say to Riley. He pulled down his book a few centimeters and watched Riley monologue for a moment. “They probably are watching us, planning on what next step to do to get there planet back there with the others- or they want to take revenge on what we did. Ben! This is serious matter here!” Riley stood up and started gesturing with his arms. He looked a bit disturbed by the matter. Ben lowered his book again, and sighed. “Really, Riley, we can’t do anything about it.” Riley looked seriously worried for a minute, and jotted it down on a post-it. He stuck the note to his laptop. “There. Might as well put that on my blog.” “Real profound Riley. While we’re on that subject, maybe you could also ask about the tooth fairy, and the serious law-breaking violations that she does when she takes a tooth.” (Wow. That was actually a good comeback! Pretty long though. Ben has to work on that, and the delivery…) “Wow Ben, that statement is… real important for people to hear about!” Riley responded, acting as if he missed the dripping sarcasm. He wrote it down on another Post-it. With that, Riley lied back on the couch and turned the tv on again. Ben rolled his eyes, and returned to his book. He sighed, and murmured under his breath. “Sometimes, I just don’t know what to do to that kid…” This is a serious matter. The beings on Pluto might not like it. I for one, would definitely not like it if Earth’s status as a planet gets… “demoted”. I urge you guys, to think about this. They might be watching us. Right now. RILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEYRILEY The tooth fairy is another matter, it’s for another entry… it would come out soon... This is something I came up with while me and my mom were grocery shopping. I was staring at a shelf of hair conditioners when I got the idea. “How must Pluto feel now that it’s demoted to the status of a dwarf planet?” Then, I realized its something Riley could possibly ask about out of the blue, so, here it is… The tooth fairy, me and my bro was talking about her the other day. Wow. Random. R&R please! -Jaeh xD



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:29 AM Post #12
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	Tooth fairy, as promised. Riley’s POV in italics. Disclaimer- The author owns nothing, so please, don’t sue me. NTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNT Speech Riley’s POV The Tooth Fairy Article – Rough draft I am here now, to address the unimaginably serious law violations that the tooth fairy is committing by taking the tooth under our pillows. Point number one- Entering Private property. People, we leave our windows open to cool off. And what does the tooth fairy do? She would just, literally, fly in through our windows without permission! It’s TRESPASSING. Point number two- Stealing She steals from our homes, ladies and gentlemen. She steals the tooth from under our pillows. Never mind that she always gives us money in return. A tooth is worth more than a dollar. Point number three- Swindling The tooth worth more than a dollar is taken, and the fairy leaves behind a false statement through the parents that the tooth is indeed worth just a dollar, no matter how hard you protest. This, my fellow citizens, concludes my lecture. The Tooth Fairy is a menace to our society and we should protect our homes from this threat entering our homes every time we lose a tooth. We must take caution! Ben’s Comment: treasure.protector- Wow. You did post it. Let me guess, your parents didn’t play the part of the tooth fairy when you were little. Honestly Riley, why is there a need for defacing the good name of the folklore? Poor children must be scared now. –Ben (PS: I posted this despite the hazard of the… “fangirls”. Give me some credit!) Riley’s Reply: i.am.awesome- Ben, you just plain admitted that the tooth fairy is just a tale. A TALE spun out by some people in history who have nothing else to do. And you're worried about my entry scaring children? Seriously. You could have just told me everything. You ARE sitting beside me in the house. Weirdo. –Riley (PS: What do you mean credit? You didn’t exactly post a good comment there dude!) TOOTHTEETHTOOTHTEEETHTOOTHTEETHTOOTH Sorry for the wrong law stuff in there, I did my best, trust me on that. I know Riley “wrote” it for his blog in the story context, but it’s still in “Rough Draft” when it was ‘released’. Let’s all pretend he still has to look stuff up, and he knows that he still does. Erm, R&R please, even just to say it sucked! -Jaeh xD



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:54 AM Post #13
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	Thanks to Savvysparrowluv, my brainstorm partner! Thanks to all the people who reviewed! Please continue reading.. enjoy.. Yep, another “Riley’s sick” fic- well, drabble anyway. Ah, please, don’t get tired of it? xD Italics – Riley’s POV xD Disclaimer: I own nothing. –sigh- NTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNTNT Riley dragged himself down the stairs, Smurfs pillow (It’s a blueish green man with a normal goatee! Who doesn't love the Smurfs?) in hand. He looked tired, pale, and sickly, his hair sticking up at odd angles. Riley clutched the banister and tried to wake up a bit more before getting all the way downstairs. Abby saw him, and examined him with concern. “Riley? You look really sick!” Riley rolled his eyes. “Duh, you think?” He said- or rather, he tried to say. He tried again, this time trying to shout his own name at the top of his lungs. He managed a small squeak. Abby’s eyes widened. “You can’t speak?” “Not a word.” Riley mouthed, scowling. Abby giggled. “Wow. A day without a single witty remark to be heard! HAH!” Riley glared at her. Sure, let us all have a tea party and celebrate the fact that Riley is sick and had just lost his voice. Abby got a notebook and a pen lying on a desk. Riley took up his position on the living room sofa. “Can someone please get me a glass of water?” Riley wrote. “Get your own.” Abby said with a shrug. “I’m sick Abby, give me a break…” Of all the days, this is the one Abby picks to be especially cruel. “Somehow Riley, when you write it down, it doesn’t sound-or read as smug as when you say it.” Abby dropped him the notebook, and went to the kitchen to get him some water. Riley glared daggers in Abby’s general direction. He sighed, and turned the tv on. Ben bounded down the stairs. “Hey Riley…” He greeted. Riley waved a hand. Ben smiled at him, and headed straight to the kitchen. Then he stopped in his tracks, realizing that Riley didn’t say a thing, not a snide comment, or even just a good morning. “Riley? Are you okay?” He touched Riley’s forehead. “You’re really, really hot!” Riley looked at him feverishly. He shook his head, and raised his notebook. Ben took it from him. He read it aloud. “I know that already Ben, but coming from you? It kinda freaks me out.” Ben rolled his eyes. “Riley…” Riley snatched the notebook and wrote furiously on it. He threw it back to Ben, who deftly caught it. “Lo5t my voiee, ard I’m sick, Captair Obvious…?”Ben raised a brow. “A grade-schooler rights better Riley. Besides, that is not an N.” It IS an N! Riley protested, mouthing his words. He snatched the notebook back. “Lost my voice, and I’m sick, Captain Obvious. There, ya happy?” “Better.” Ben tapped Riley’s shoulder, and left to go to the kitchen. Riley listened to Ben and Abby laugh together. I can’t believe it. They are actually enjoying this! “Riley! Here’s your water.” Abby handed Riley the glass of water. Riley took the glass and drank from it. He scribbled something on the paper. “Thaks?” Riley took the notebook from Abby, and corrected his spelling. “Thanks.” Abby laughed. “Ri, you just got sick, you didn’t get dumber.” Riley rolled his eyes. He coughed, and snuggled in the sofa. He shivered. Abby and Ben smiled with concern. “We’re just messing around, kiddo.” Ben handed him a warm blanket. Abby pushed a thermometer in Riley’s mouth. “Under the tongue, Ri.” She grinned at him. Abby left for the kitchen, and came back with some chicken soup. She took the thermometer from Riley. “I’ll bring you some medicine when you finish your soup.” “Have some rest, kid.” Ben mussed Riley’s hair, and the two left Riley alone. Riley smiled, and leaned his head back. Now this, is how people should treat someone who’s sick. Can’t wait for my voice to get back, though. Ben and Abby are in trouble. Serious trouble. SICKSICKSICKSICKSICKSICKSICKSICKSICKSICK Please R&R! -Jaeh x) yeah, I know that they treat Riley like a kid..... That's why is later chapters, I remedied that itty bitty prob.... but it's still painfully cute the way they treat him!



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2008, 06:58 AM Post #14
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	...should i post more?


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