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Topic Started: Sep 17 2009, 08:29 PM (51 Views)
Ben Zwycky	Sep 17 2009, 08:29 PM Post #1
Fearsome Fleet Leader :D Posts: 541 Group: Admin Member #4 Joined: November 29, 2007	Hero A small town groans and suffers Corrupt and full of strife Where evil reigns and smothers All hope and joys of life. Then came along a wandering fire To cleanse the streets of sin Though fearsome were his features Yet still was welcomed in. Great struggles raged and shook the homes Of monsters calm and proud Who limped away with broken bones Defeated, weak and cowed. And when the work was done they asked Him to stay on a while To teach them to perform the task And face the coming trial. With bravery renewed they meet To bid their guest farewell And thank him for his mighty feat To end their living hell. They don't now need one hero For all must do their part; Now all have seen and all now know They need a whole new start.



Cezille07	Sep 29 2009, 11:52 AM Post #2
L'addict de Monster Allergy Posts: 38 Group: Members Member #81 Joined: July 23, 2009	It's a nice concept and story here. It's simple and yet the meaning runs very deep. The images are very nice and the message subtle (the subtlety being rare in much of the poetry I read outside literature class).


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