Caged

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Caged
Topic Started: Sep 17 2009, 08:27 PM (47 Views)
Ben Zwycky	Sep 17 2009, 08:27 PM Post #1
Fearsome Fleet Leader :D Posts: 541 Group: Admin Member #4 Joined: November 29, 2007	Caged Where am I now? What is this place, Its shadows etched upon my face? Here scars of unexhausted rage There monuments to pride. There caves of self-indulgence, Too many flaws to hide Here bitter scrawls of vengeance List wrongs to be paid back High walls to keep good friends away All gnarled and painted black. Revolted as I turn away Truth pierces like a dart. Revealing that this cage is but My sordid selfish heart.



la-vida-loca	Oct 12 2009, 06:46 PM Post #2
Låt den rätte komma in Posts: 2,017 Group: Elite Members Member #13 Joined: December 3, 2007	o.O excellent little twist at the end! i got a little confused by the "There"s, because i kept reading it like "their", so...i confused myself, lol. but that's not really too important...what would the beat for reading that be?



Ben Zwycky	Oct 12 2009, 07:30 PM Post #3
Fearsome Fleet Leader :D Posts: 541 Group: Admin Member #4 Joined: November 29, 2007	I don't know how to describe a rhythm. I could try recording an MP3 of myself reciting it if you can't figure it out yourself, OK, here it is: http://www.zwyckypublishing.wubbema.com/misc/Caged.mp3 Edited by Ben Zwycky, Oct 12 2009, 07:55 PM.


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