Every Breath You Take

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Every Breath You Take; ..have I already posted this? ah well.
Topic Started: Aug 1 2009, 05:06 AM (175 Views)
Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Aug 1 2009, 05:06 AM Post #1
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	Every breath you take… His eyes traced her sleeping figure, his fingers adjusting the lenses of his binoculars. Breath in, out… In, out… Roll over to one side, hug a pillow, kick off blanket. He knew her like his own reflection, every scene through the binoculars like he was looking through a mirror. He thought they were so… alike. So perfect for each other. He didn’t know what went wrong. But he knew he was going to set it right. *Every move you make…* She ran into the dark alley, and tried to double back when she realized how bad the idea was. The smell of sweat, pee, and rotting garbage pierced her nostrils, racking her with cough. She just wanted to curl up beside the dumpster and disappear. She just wanted her coughing to stop. She just wanted this to end. So many things she wanted. So many things that went wrong. And that was when he found her. Every bond you break… She didn’t know how much he suffered. She didn’t know how much it hurt. And now that he had her in his hands – now she would know. One way or another. She would find out. The radio blasted songs in the background, and he danced to it, every word he traced on her back… her arms… her cheek. Every breath you take… Every move you make… Every bond you break… Every step you take… I’ll be watching you. Every word that came out of his mouth was unnerving and disconcerting. Every touch of his finger sent shivers crawling all over her body. The bonds that tied her hurt. She wanted to break free. From the ropes. From the tapes. From the chair. From him. And then she felt something snap. Every step you take He was surprised when she broke off. He knew he had underestimated her, and now she had broken free. He howled in pain when she picked up the chair and smashed it on the side of his face. He watched her run. Running as fast as she could. He laughed, knowing that running was useless. He watched her run down the stairs and out into the treed maze. I’m going to get you, baby. *I’ll be watching you* She screamed as he approached, hoping that somehow, her voice would cut through the forest and reach a living thing that would put an end to her misery. Someone that would help her. But she knew it wouldn’t work. She knew she was going to die. And as he knocked her to the ground, tears running down her eyes, her last fleeting thought was that she shouldn’t have dumped him. He leveled the gun to her head and pulled the trigger.



la-vida-loca	Aug 1 2009, 06:07 PM Post #2
Låt den rätte komma in Posts: 2,017 Group: Elite Members Member #13 Joined: December 3, 2007	that song sketches me out. even before i read this, so of course it only added to the "creepy" factor. anyway, good and creepy story!



Cezille07	Sep 29 2009, 12:16 PM Post #3
L'addict de Monster Allergy Posts: 38 Group: Members Member #81 Joined: July 23, 2009	It works even a second time. You showed me this before, Jaeh, remember? And I read it again and it still was creepy.



Jaeh_Is_Awesome	Oct 3 2009, 03:23 PM Post #4
Rogue Squadron Fan Posts: 151 Group: Members Member #6 Joined: November 29, 2007	Yep. xD and glad it still crept you out. xD I like writing dark and creepy stuff. I have a twisted sense of.. almost everything. xD



Cezille07	Oct 5 2009, 08:04 AM Post #5
L'addict de Monster Allergy Posts: 38 Group: Members Member #81 Joined: July 23, 2009	Jaeh_Is_Awesome Oct 3 2009, 03:23 PM Yep. xD and glad it still crept you out. xD I like writing dark and creepy stuff. I have a twisted sense of.. almost everything. xD Lol. Twisted. (Random-- I feel like twisted fries, suddenly. )


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