Fanfiction Twlight/ Breaking Dawn pick up

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Fanfiction Twlight/ Breaking Dawn pick up; my guess of something that could happen
Topic Started: Jul 31 2008, 03:56 PM (149 Views)
Alcamie	Jul 31 2008, 03:56 PM Post #1
Prince of a Fallen Kingdom Posts: 45 Group: Members Member #51 Joined: May 24, 2008	“Oh Alice tell me the wedding wont be overboard, do not go over board...” I knew better though, when Alice smiled I saw the twinkle in her eye, she couldn’t hide it from me... I groaned “well at least don’t go over 50 people..” a twitch in her smile gave her away, “that wasnt part of the agreement that we made...” I smiled, and hissed “well then im compromising!” Edward came from behind me, “let her be,” he whispered softly in my ear, “she never got to have a wedding with jasper, this means just as much to me as her...” I groaned seeing that I wouldn't win, “fine the max is 150 people..” Alice laughed, “I didn’t go that overboard just 149"... I groaned once more. Edward pulled me away, relax “remember you wanted this.” his kissed my neck and I felt the cold pleasing shiver run up my spine, it was true, but I wanted to argue back. He kissed me all around my neck, each time the cold touch made me forget a small part of my thoughts and before I could say anymore, I had forgotten what I was going to say. He pulled me to his chest and continued to move his lips up my neck and around my cheeks until it reached my lips, and then I gave in... He pulled out of our kiss. I groaned sadly, as we walked to his bedroom. He smiled rubbing my hand as he went. I plaloped down onto the bed and waiting for Edward to join me so that we could continued where we had left off. He kissed my neck and I felt the pure pleasure run through my veins again. It felt so good, as he laid me back still continuing to kiss my neck. He came up and moved over to my ear. He whispered “she’s planning to have 175 guest.” I tried to push up in shock, I wanted to get up run down stairs and tell her that we had a deal! But Edward kissed my ear and then straddled on top of me, keeping me down and around. I jerked my lips away from his, “thats not fair, I want to..” Edward distracted me so easily, so it was understandable that I lost my train of thought as he put his cold fingers around my neck and continued to kiss me. Oh how I had wished I hadn’t told him to wait, I felt so stupid, I wanted him now. I felt my heartbeat pick up and then as I felt myself about to lose control over my thoughts, I regained my senses. Edward felt the shift in my body and slowly moved away from his position, he moved over to my side, curling his fingers in my hair as I gazed into his eyes. “That was close, wasn’t it?” I nodded out of breath, oh I hope that I could wait, for him. I thought about it as I gazed into his eyes. “What are you thinking about?” He whispered this softly. “That I would do anything for you.” Edward smiled with that perfect crooked smile, my heart leapt, “and I for you Bella, always.” I held up my ring and looked at it as it shined in the light that came through the windows. “I can’t believe Charlie put up a fight, when he found out.” Edward made a musically sounding laugh. “Well you weren’t the one who had to listen to his thoughts, I was so sure he was going to pull that gun from his belt.” I laughed from that as well. Charlie just worried because his and Renee’s marriage didn’t last like they thought. And it didn’t matter how young I was because Edward was technically older then my father, at least mentally he was. We were different, eternity is what we would promise eachother on our wedding day, and that’s how long our love would last to eternity and if that didn’t work out then to our deaths.



la-vida-loca	Sep 1 2008, 12:12 AM Post #2
Låt den rätte komma in Posts: 2,017 Group: Elite Members Member #13 Joined: December 3, 2007	okay, i want to read this. but sadly i can't because i can't tell who's talking. can you do a huge favor and make paragraphs? please? it's just really hard to read when it's a jumble and everybody happens to be talking in that jumble. O_o


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